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chap 1 as a kid
One day this kid named nick. Was playing war with his freinds and he sed I thenk that it wold be cool to be in a war. I don't sed one of is freinds. I wold sed one of is freinds. so he sed to his mom and dad that him and his freind sed it wold be cool to be in war. well sed his dad I thot it wold be cool to be in war. well did you go to war no I am stil standing. just be cus you go to war it doesn't mein that you wil die. no but wen I was a teen I thot that I wold die.
chap 2 as a teen
wen nick was teen he stel thot that it wold be cool to go to war so for his 15 teenth birthday he got a gun and he played war and he thot that he was in war so he bilt wood people and shot them and he had fun he did that everday so he cold go to war he mad som mistakes but he did not do iney damidh and his dad sed you are geting god with your gun yes sed nickso days went by and it was his dads birthday and he got a gun so a day later him and his dad went in to the wolds and shot sum and then thay went back to there house and had diner.
chap 3 go to war
well nick got older and he did go war with his freind and thay loved it but at crist mes thay cam home to see there parents but then thay had to go back to war and fight but wen thay got thar thay herd that thay were going to fight this big town and thay foi 45 wars and never lost and nick tean had lost som and thaen he call his mom and dad and told them and thay sed fight and nick sed wut I can not I will die no you will not call rite be fore ok sed nick and his freind calld his mom and dad and told them and thay sed the same thing then nick sed to his freind and sed we ned to fight so thay talk to there bos and asked wen is thes war tomawo ok we wel be wede see you tomarwo ok sed ther bos
chap 4 the big war
the day of the big war and nick and his freind call there mom and dad to tell them thay sed thay wold pray for them and wen the tawn cam in thay fot 10 of nicks ten rane away and if thay rane away thay woldd get firerd so thay fot and thay wun but 10 people on nick tem got kild and nick and his freind got lost in the batol and then there bos calld there mom and dad and told them thay thay had wun and then nick mom sed wiy did you call wel that is wiy I cald you nick and his freind got lost in the batol
chap 5 the serch
well 3 days went by and thay stel had not cam bak so there bos set a sherch party so he cold find them so the neked day he calld som tawns to help so wen the tawn got thay they serched and 3 days later thay fawnd them so nick cald his mom and dad and sed hi and nick mom sed are you are wite yes mom I am fine ok I love you love you to mom and tell dad that I sed hi. Ok sed nick
chap 6 the brak
well wen nick got fawnd and cald is mom he went to his bos and sed I haf to go home and nick bos sed ok wen will you be back 2 weks ok see you in tow weks ok and nick and his freind left and a lot of stuf had haptem thos 2 weks nick had is 50 birthday and wen the 2 weks were orver thay went back to war.
chap 7 go to the hospital
well wen nick got back to war thay went to say hi to there bos and he sed hi I got som news we will go fight the sam team that we fot last time ok so nick cald is mom and told her and she sed you can do it ok thanks mom and the nex day thay fot but this time thay lost and nick got lost in the batal and thay did the sam theng bud wen thay fawnd them thay wre vary hert and there bos cald there moms and told them and then there moms cam up and tock them to the hosbetal and that is the end.
You are a cool kid. I love you.
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